Rough Draft Font. 9/12/2015 via VisionWidget. |
I understand that my rough draft is a pretty rough draft. I plan on adding more details and images throughout. I would love to hear if there are other details that you are interested in me adding so that I can help inform my audience in what they want to know.
Here is the link to my draft: Click Here
Wow you're doing the Uber controversy too?!
ReplyDeleteReading your post, I did seem to notice some clarity issues. THere were some awkward sentences and some odd phrases. As well, there is some grammatical errors here and there. I understand the point of your paper and its clear to read, however it may be worthwhile to rephrase some stuff so that you are able to get an even clearer flow to your paper.
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