Paragraph Analysis

This post is about my experience analyzing my own draft, specifically the paragraph formatting and development.

Here is my Copy for Paragraph Analysis.

Going through my draft, I found it hard to look at it with fresh eyes, because I knew what I was trying to say. So immediately, I had reevaluate how to look at my document. I was pretty proud of how concise my paragraphs were compared to my past work. Some of my paragraphs needed a little bit more commentary or development. I think I need a few more transitions to make them flow. But overall, I think they were focused and to the point. I plan to continue to revise and edit my QRG until I feel like there is nothing else I can do.