Draft of Open Letter

In this post, I will attach the draft for open letter to Mr. Bottai and my peers. But first, some things you should know before reading it. 

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I am still working on the flow of my letter. I have all my major points down, I just need to work on the flow a little more. If you would give feedback on the balance of professionalism and friendliness. 

Also, if you could keep an eye out for grammar mistakes.

HERE is my draft. 

Thanks! 

B.A. Jordan